Skeletal Feet poster feedback.

This is a poster I made at the Rhode Island School of Design pre-college summer program that I’m currently attending, it was made for a basic design class. The project was to make a painting inspired by an assigned sin, I was assigned the sin of sloth. I very much wanted to make a super graphic, beautiful, and jumpy representation of such a brown, slow, and tired sin. I first made it in illustrator then had it printed out in black and white, cut that out into a stencil then traced it onto a sheet of BFK paper, I then painted it using red gauche. As always, your feedback is more than welcome.

heart feedback

This is something I made while messing around in illustrator with some templates I made, I plan on giving it to someone but the broken heart make it a tid awkward and difficult to use in certain situations. As always, your feed back is welcomed with open arms.

"A" poster feedback!

This is a poster I made for a friend, her room was in serious need of some clean and beautiful modernism. Her name is Alex, hence the letter a. As usual feedback is greatly appreciated, and while your at it, let me know what you think about the rest of my work.

Love typography feedback

This is something I made while I was bored during the first week of summer vacation. Let me know what you think. I chose the word I did because it is my favorite word for a myriad reasons.

Fathers day card feedback

This is a card I made for my dad on father’s day. The glasses are styled after a pair he has worn since I can remember, they are perfectly him, He is instantly recognizable by these glasses, so I thought it was only appropriate to incorporate them into this design. Let me know what you think. and leave out the comments about me using Helvetica too much, its a beautiful typeface.

feedback

This is the second of two posters I made for my language arts teacher who is leaving at the end of this year. It’s supposed to be a weeping willow, the whole tree idea was based on the tree of knowledge and such, One of my other ideas was an apple but I ended up not going for that. as always let me know what you think.

feedback

This is one of two posters I made for my Language Arts teacher who is leaving our school at the end of this year. He’s a big guy with a beard who wears glasses and is very into typography and writing. He is one of my favorite teachers so I made this for him, I’m screen printing it this weekend and presenting it to him at graduation, as always feedback is greatly appreciated

Card feedback

This is a birthday card I made for a girl I liked quite a bit. I went with the circles because they remind me of being welcomed because of how they envelop you. I feel a darker color would have been nice to bring more attention to the welcoming nature of it all. I also chose the word joy because she is one of the happiest people I have ever met. and finally I chose the colors I did because those are the colors I think of when I think of her, she has long blond hair and bright baby blue eyes, that is also why it is shaped like an eye. let me know what you think, appreciated!

poster feedback!

This is the final poster I’m going to post that I made for the global studies presentation on the internet, this one is talking about the idea of limitless information made by possible by the internet and sites like google.com. let me know what you think!

Further poster feedback!

This is the second of five posters I did for a global studies presentation on the internet, this one represents the idea that we are spending too much time infront of the computer and we are losing sight of nautre because of it.

what I particularly like about this one is the fact that every aspect minus color is in some way connected with the golden mean. let me know what you think