Typophile - Request for critical eyes ... - Comments

I want to see it at the

eeblet — Fri, 11 Apr 2008 15:29:01 -0700

I want to see it at the final size(s) it will be shown at - it looks a bit odd at that large size, but without any context, I don’t have any reaction other than “yes, there are some parallel lines in there and the text is illustrating the word.”

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without knowing the purpose

jayyy — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 15:07:46 -0700

without knowing the purpose or application, I love the concept.

What would make it look great would be if you work it out from a grid of triangles, so all the whitespace and letterforms work together and everything is symetrical and balanced.

know what I mean?

“what’s the context and

Ratbaggy — Wed, 9 Apr 2008 14:57:00 -0700

“what’s the context and application? give a better idea of what you’re trying to achieve.”

agreed.

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Graphic Design

what’s the context and

nvhladek — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 15:40:52 -0700

what’s the context and application? give a better idea of what you’re trying to achieve.

Could be - I’d have to see

TDF — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 11:04:52 -0700

Could be - I’d have to see it aligned...
I like to err on the side of lining things up - makes it seem deliberate.

Luke - that does make sense.

Gemma Bayly — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 10:17:58 -0700

Luke - that does make sense.

We did try an option with the ’l’ being in line with the ’i’, and wondered if being too technical and precise took away from the personality of it? Our initial thoughts were that the slight variation in angle alignment was a good thing. Maybe it is too distracting when not aligned?

re-uploaded.

Gemma Bayly — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 10:13:18 -0700

re-uploaded.

likey

mr smith — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 09:31:28 -0700

likey

Please re-upload it as an

aluminum — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 09:30:05 -0700

Please re-upload it as an *RGB* jpg file.

I like it! I would maybe

TDF — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 09:24:22 -0700

I like it!
I would maybe shorten the ’l’ so that the angles on the top left of the ’i’ line up with those of the ’l’.
Does that make any sense?

Luke.

sorry! image didn’t show

Gemma Bayly — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 09:14:08 -0700

sorry! image didn’t show up ... :)

Er, tear what apart? Ross

rlynch — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 09:02:07 -0700

Er, tear what apart?

Ross

Request for critical eyes ...

Gemma Bayly — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 08:52:29 -0700

Go on. Tear it apart.