Typophile - Pakline logo critique - Comments

with Nick on this

Ratbaggy — Wed, 4 Jun 2008 19:14:03 -0700

with Nick on this one.

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Paul Ducco
Graphic Design

If your new designs can

nvhladek — Wed, 4 Jun 2008 10:49:10 -0700

If your new designs can ditch the BV business, then I think you should go with 1/2/3/5 without the BV business:

This element of your design is simple, and feels clean/sterile in a way appropriate to hospital products. Everything else feels tacked on.

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Nick Hladek

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Kyrus — Wed, 4 Jun 2008 04:23:50 -0700

Ok finally something came

Kyrus — Wed, 4 Jun 2008 03:45:09 -0700

Ok finally something came out my mind and I made this new one:

I got a problem now though, I really need to put the BV logo in it, but I’ve tried several positions but none of it works. Any ideas?

Cheers!

I like the idea of having

Dan Weaver — Tue, 3 Jun 2008 11:03:15 -0700

I like the idea of having the Pakline in a package.

Hello and thank you for your

Kyrus — Tue, 3 Jun 2008 04:14:29 -0700

Hello and thank you for your comments.

BV is a registered label that has to be attached to this logo, so I can’t cut it out. I’ve made some changes this morning, mostly towards the simplicity. Got two new examples to show and would appreciate further comments as always.

Cheers.

I personally like #10 both

ryan.bruner — Tue, 3 Jun 2008 01:50:42 -0700

I personally like #10 both typographically and compositionally. But I think there is a stronger figure/ground relationship in #1 with the B and y. But that makes me question what that means exactly, like hola mentioned.

I like # 10. Has movement.

AGL — Mon, 2 Jun 2008 09:29:58 -0700

I like # 10. Has movement. The rotated square would be better a couple of points up. Maybe the box all in green if you like that.

what is the “by” suppose

hola — Fri, 30 May 2008 13:02:50 -0700

what is the “by” suppose to signify? I like #6 without the little “by” icon. I like the enclosure and interaction of Pakline and square and rectangle. If you made the solid green rectangle a tiny bit longer on the bottom you might a pretty nice “P” concept out of both open square and rectangle.

http://www.piac.com.pk Just

AzizMostafa — Fri, 30 May 2008 08:57:54 -0700

http://www.piac.com.pk
Just Kidding with Flowers

Pakline logo critique

Kyrus — Fri, 30 May 2008 08:37:39 -0700

Hello.

First of all I’m new here, so hello to everyone, great forum you have here.

Now back to the topic. I’m designing a logotype for a company that produces and sells medical devices. We’re gonna have a a new line now tho, and we’re needing a logo for it. This line is called “Pakline” and it’s purpose is to include several products into one pack (eg. Surgical procedure pack). The following are the logotypes we designed so far.

Any critique would be appreciated, along with some ideas for new concepts.

Thank you.
Pedro Peixoto