High contrast extended sans, feedback needed.

nrcs's picture

Hello Typophile,

I'm working on a piece of lettering with plans of extending it to a full display typeface later.
I would highly appreciate any professional feedback on this stage.
(yep i want to stick with such leg for "R"=)

Ryuk's picture

First, I like it. Second, I'd be glad to help but I don't want spend my time giving bad or incomprehensible explanations. Is it possible for you to provide a sample as PDF or vector in order to easily "modify" your lettering? Third, I'm no professional at all.

Chris Dean's picture

@nrcs: Is this a personal, professional, or academic project?

hrant's picture

Those gently flaring thin strokes are the best thing about this design, so work that good.

Ryuk, nice to see you on this side. :-)

hhp

nrcs's picture

@Ryuk: Thank You. Sure. Sorry i'm still not familiar with managing content here, so can i just post a direct link?
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1688987/MDP/mdp.pdf

nrcs's picture

@Chris Dean: I'd call it semi-personal work. It's part of a branding project for my fellow fashion designer.

kavin paker's picture

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