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francisco camberos's picture
Joined: 18 Apr 2005 - 8:00pm
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I know there isnt much type on this but id lke to get some feedback…..



*image is kinda big (sorry modem users…)Wheels ad

darrel's picture
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Joined: 4 Feb 2003 - 6:03pm
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I’d loose the letterspacing in Carlos Ruiz and I’d change its to it’s

Also, where’s the follow-through? Locations to buy? Web site? If the ad catches someone’s attention, you really need to give them something to do if they want more information about it.

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Joined: 11 Sep 2003 - 9:04am
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There is too much tracking on Carlos Ruiz, especially compared to -Switch Ollie. For -Switch Ollie you should use either an en dash and word space instead of the hyphen or em dash and no word space.

Daniel Weaver's picture
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Joined: 17 Jan 2004 - 12:20pm
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Graphicly I would loose the brackets on the 4x and 8x they don’t help the look. You need a headline like: No Way (that would tie it to the