"Heart & Mind" custom lettering

Hey guys I've been working on this custom lettering project. What do you guys think? Is the composition balanced? Is this too busy? Your suggestions & constructive criticism would be much appreciated!

It's inspired by this quote... "Wealth is of the heart and mind, not the pocket" by Pharrell.

Thanks,
- Joseph
www.josephle.net

J. Tillman's picture

The one thing I wonder is why the crossbar of the t doesn't go through (or maybe I should say over and under) like the crossbar of the H. For the rest of your question, I'm not really qualified to comment.

J. Tillman's picture

The one thing I wonder is why the crossbar of the t doesn't go through (or maybe I should say over and under) like the crossbar of the H. For the rest of your question, I'm not really qualified to comment.

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