Heres my latest attempt. Getting warmer… http://www.selfbuildtype.com/gallery/graﬀtests.gif
thats phat. the only thing i dont like is the bottom of the S and E. since you’re going for the feel of a tag (correct me if i’m wrong) it doesnt really ﬂow with the rest of the character. it looks like the bottom part was added after the rest of the S or E was written, when normally the letter is all one stroke. but maybe thats how you “write,” but i just think that bottom part should ﬂow a little more with the rest of the letter. and maybe the A could use a little more style near the top, like a serif up there pointing to the left.
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