Banja

anonymous's picture

hi there!

first of all: i'm a total typedesign newbie.
and i just wanted to know what you guys think about this:

http://mitglied.lycos.de/froedi2/banja.gif

thanks for having a look at it.


froedi

anonymous's picture

hmm ... something went wrong with the image.

http://mitglied.lycos.de/froedi2/banja.gif

should work ...

beejay's picture

Froedi - this is very classy and feminine. I can't see much about it that I'd change besides the tail on the 'y' and the 'high' crossbar on the 'f'. Nice, elegant work.

One thing I would do is add weights. This thin of a weight...it's difficult to find uses. Oh + an uppercase. :)

Also, see the bezier work of Christian Robertson in this forum and Bernhard Fashion.

If you can design an uppercase that matches the elegance of the lowercase, then you'll have something special.


bj

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