This is a script logotype I designed. It's one of my first attempts at one, if another set of eyes could look at it and point out any flaws that would be great. Larger screenshot is attached. Thanks!
I think it's coming along nicely, Matthew! A couple of things to consider:
- there are some inconsistencies with your stroke weights, particularly in your thin strokes, such as the branching of the /m/ and the bottom branching of the /a/ and /d/ which need to be much thinner
- a bit too much space in the counter of the /s/? Overall, that form doesn't carry as much weight as the other letters either, thicken it up a bit
- the exit stroke of the /d/ could be a bit shorter as well
- the crossbar of the /H/ and the adjoining top right loop seem to be different widths as well