Critique this script?

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Joined: 11 Feb 2011 - 12:44am
Critique this script?
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Hello,

This is a script logotype I designed. It's one of my first attempts at one, if another set of eyes could look at it and point out any flaws that would be great. Larger screenshot is attached. Thanks!

Laura Worthington's picture
Joined: 3 Jan 2010 - 2:33pm
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I think it's coming along nicely, Matthew! A couple of things to consider:

- there are some inconsistencies with your stroke weights, particularly in your thin strokes, such as the branching of the /m/ and the bottom branching of the /a/ and /d/ which need to be much thinner

- a bit too much space in the counter of the /s/? Overall, that form doesn't carry as much weight as the other letters either, thicken it up a bit

- the exit stroke of the /d/ could be a bit shorter as well

- the crossbar of the /H/ and the adjoining top right loop seem to be different widths as well