My first sans serif font – some feedback? :)

FernandoMarco's picture

This is my first sans serif font. I actually send it for the insentive program of TypeTogether but my project wasn't choosed :(
After that, I think some feedback can help me to catch the problems i didn't see before.
Thany you all! :D

Link on behance: https://www.behance.net/gallery/16049109/Gro-Typeface-soon-

bojev's picture

Nice effort - I like the way it looks for text setting. Might be a bit too much like Avenir. Still a nice sans, but it could use something to make it stand out from the crowd.

hrant's picture

The reason they declined to take this on might be because it's too "predictable". But it's not easy to make something surprising without resorting to gimmicks...

hhp

eliason's picture

Increased letterspacing and smaller wordspaces would help this.

anila31's picture

I really like your creation. Very good job.

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