New World Organics

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Forrest Vess's picture
Joined: 14 Jun 2005 - 3:06pm
New World Organics

This is a logo I am working on for my own side project.

I hand make "organic" jewelry for people with Large gauge holes in their ears.

I know it still needs work, and I always enjoy reading your critiques so I figured it was time to throw one of mine out there.

Thank you.

Bart van der Griendt's picture
Joined: 14 Apr 2004 - 3:01am

Hey Forrest,

I am sorry to say that it doesn't work for me. The type is somewhere near okay (the lowercase e looks smallish, though), but the twig just doesn't have the right feel. Too literal, in my opinion.

I think the rather straight shape of the words collides with the loose treatment of the twig. The two should be a unity.

The twig refers to the organic, but I think some reference to jewelry might be better.

Keep up the good work!

My work is a game. A very serious game [M.C. Escher]

Daniel Weaver's picture
Joined: 26 Aug 2003 - 4:14pm

A few points one loose the twig as Bart suggests. The G has the shape of an ear with an ear ring hanging from it already. Maybe slighly modifing that shape will make it clearer what you are making. Over all the letter and word spacing needs major work. Start with one word get the spacing working then use that word as your benchmark for the other two. Good start keep going.