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I was just looking for some feedback on a poster l created for a friends music night. The night is called Sprawl, so l created a font based on patterns of urban sprawl. The poster is A3,urrr the font only works for a high point size.
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21 Sep 2005 — 2:22pm
Jee whizz dole-mate! That is really pretty, I like the energy. I wonder why no-one else has commented…
Hel-lloooooooo?
22 Sep 2005 — 10:28am
Kris is right that deserves some positive comment, that font/image reminds me of the maps created by tracking ants searching for food that I saw somewhere recently, with the bewildered/lone-wolf ants wandering off track. Overall a strong poster coupled with an intriguing image.
Tim
1 Oct 2005 — 8:05am
It's all positive... I think it's both strong and intricate, I wouldn't change anything about it; the built-up linework stands out and draws you in. I also like the treatment of type in tightly ordered bands. Nice one!
Si
1 Oct 2005 — 11:37am
Thanks for the good feedback. I am currently changing/tweaking my portfolio, so its good to hear a positive responce.
2 Oct 2005 — 8:20am
I don't see the connection to sprawl per se - but the poster is very very nice indeed - and matches electronic music quite nicely! Congrats!
4 Nov 2005 — 2:40pm
I love it dole. Nice work.
28 Nov 2005 — 10:04pm
Wow. LOVE.
you could try some type treatments on the bottom. e.g. the same typeface with different combinations of weights, spaces. Formally, I ask how do you get thicks and thins in there? A serif used in the right places could be cool. Cheers.. love what you've done.
8 Dec 2005 — 1:30pm
Thanks, l have a t-shirt design at threadless if anyone is interested in commenting
http://www.threadless.com/submission/61005/dive
19 Dec 2006 — 12:57pm
Dont waste time posting to threadless, they will only profit off of your creativity. I like your poster however, its interesting yet kind of hairy.
~ 3r