This is my first post. I’ve been playing with this logo for a few weeks. This is for the students study association of the Faculty of Creative and Performing Arts. The first logo was horible, so I offerd to change it. Here you can see what the current logo is.
Something is wrong with the eye and I don't know what. I tried to but the pupil in the middle, but that didn't work.
I have also made a .pdf so you can look how I think the logo can work as a letterhead.
Any help or critique is appreciated