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Trying to finish Alber
Posted by coop in
19 Dec 2005 — 5:58am
19 Dec 2005 — 5:58am
Hi all,
I would really appreciate any feedback or general crit on Alber ,a sans I'm trying to finish.
Thanks in advance.
s.
| Attachment | Size |
|---|---|
| Alber v2.pdf | 88.01 KB |
| Alber v3.pdf | 89.89 KB |
| Alber.v4.pdf | 89.03 KB |
| Alberv5.pdf | 132.05 KB |
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30 Dec 2005 — 9:41am
Nothing?
hhp
30 Dec 2005 — 11:05am
That's strange, it seems to be working for me
It on a friends server so I'll look into it.
30 Dec 2005 — 11:43am
No, I see it - I meant no reaction from Typophiles?
hhp
30 Dec 2005 — 12:44pm
Ah, I see
30 Dec 2005 — 7:30pm
Quite a fine job. S/s/$ seem to all be leaning a bit to the right. The stem of the 7 may be too thin at the top. That's about all I could spot. Getting into the realm of personal taste, I might question the shear on the upper left corner of the u.
31 Dec 2005 — 12:11am
cerulean
Thanks for the response, I'll try some alterations and re-post.
s
3 Jan 2006 — 2:16pm
the stress on the 'y' seems to be on the wrong stroke
Really like what's goin on here
aaron
4 Jan 2006 — 12:00am
aaron,
Thanks for the comment, I was going to post an updated version today, I'll look at the 'y' with your comment in mind.
s
4 Jan 2006 — 4:59pm
Where is the sample to crit? I don't see a file.
ChrisL
4 Jan 2006 — 6:40pm
That's because the link highlight color on Typophile
is another symptom of graphic-designer-too-subtlitis.
Click on "Alber" in the first post.
hhp
5 Jan 2006 — 3:24am
I've added an updated version to the first post
9 Jan 2006 — 7:15am
Another update to Alber with altered accents and added Eth, Thorn etc.
1 Mar 2006 — 1:49am
I've added another updated version of Alber to the first post.
I would really appreciate any feedback, crit, approval or disapproval
Have I got this completely wrong or is it not original enough.
6 Mar 2006 — 1:52pm
I'm having a hard time with the bold. It looks a little too 'auto bold'. I'd like to see the joins have a little more contrast. That being said, this is more of an aesthetic opinion than a technical problem with the font. Over all It's a pretty polished piece of work, though.
7 Mar 2006 — 2:29am
Christian,
thanks for your comments, I've added the italics to the first post - love to hear what people think. The italics still need work with the spacing etc.