Trying to finish Alber

coop's picture

Hi all,

I would really appreciate any feedback or general crit on Alber ,a sans I'm trying to finish.

Thanks in advance.

s.

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hrant's picture

Nothing?

hhp

coop's picture

That's strange, it seems to be working for me

It on a friends server so I'll look into it.

hrant's picture

No, I see it - I meant no reaction from Typophiles?

hhp

coop's picture

Ah, I see

cerulean's picture

Quite a fine job. S/s/$ seem to all be leaning a bit to the right. The stem of the 7 may be too thin at the top. That's about all I could spot. Getting into the realm of personal taste, I might question the shear on the upper left corner of the u.

coop's picture

cerulean

Thanks for the response, I'll try some alterations and re-post.

s

aaron_carambula's picture

the stress on the 'y' seems to be on the wrong stroke
Really like what's goin on here

aaron

coop's picture

aaron,

Thanks for the comment, I was going to post an updated version today, I'll look at the 'y' with your comment in mind.

s

dezcom's picture

Where is the sample to crit? I don't see a file.

ChrisL

hrant's picture

That's because the link highlight color on Typophile
is another symptom of graphic-designer-too-subtlitis.

Click on "Alber" in the first post.

hhp

coop's picture

I've added an updated version to the first post

coop's picture

Another update to Alber with altered accents and added Eth, Thorn etc.

coop's picture

I've added another updated version of Alber to the first post.
I would really appreciate any feedback, crit, approval or disapproval
Have I got this completely wrong or is it not original enough.

Christian Robertson's picture

I'm having a hard time with the bold. It looks a little too 'auto bold'. I'd like to see the joins have a little more contrast. That being said, this is more of an aesthetic opinion than a technical problem with the font. Over all It's a pretty polished piece of work, though.

coop's picture

Christian,

thanks for your comments, I've added the italics to the first post - love to hear what people think. The italics still need work with the spacing etc.

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