Modular

tatisoares's picture

This is my first typhace. I started in class, and I´m trying to finalize it - the glyphs.
I still have to work and spacing and kern.
So please, critique.

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jazzsammich's picture

I'm curious: why the broken top on the J?

--Jim K.

tatisoares's picture

Well, It all started with the "O".
It´s a variation os the modular and the broken of J reapets in other letters k, r, v, w, 1.

jazzsammich's picture

What about placing the broken part down in the lower right-hand corner, like you did with the u? With the V and the W, there's something at cap height on the left hand to help identify the letter, so the right hand side can have the broken part without sacrificing too much in legibility. With J, there's nothing else at cap height for the eye to latch on to, so it looks (to me) like it the brokenness interrupts the visual rhythm you've established. I think it works much better on the 1, though.

--Jim K.

tatisoares's picture

Got what you meant.
Going to try that, and let u know!
thank you!

rafaelneder's picture

Hi,
you are in the wrong place? Post it in the critique/sanserif section

:D

tatisoares's picture

I´ve placed another .pdf.
Please take a look and say what you think.

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