Logo for a lobbying group.

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Nevine's picture
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Joined: 18 Dec 2003 - 9:38am
Logo for a lobbying group.
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Please be brutal! ben barnes logo

Daniel Walkington's picture
Joined: 20 Dec 2003 - 6:59am
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The emphasis and excitement is in the “group”

It is obvious that the emphasis nees to be shifted to “Ben Barnes”.

Also you have chosen a tough group of letters to kern cleanly

ole s's picture
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Joined: 1 Feb 2002 - 4:01am
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All caps followed by all lowercase? Doesn’t quite work. Have you tried to stack em’? Might be more usable this way.
Weights need a bit of work. BEN BARNES should be a bit heavier. BBG with secondary line of text “ben barnes group”
might be worth trying as well.
I agree with the comment by Daniel about the ARN kerning issues.
LC p is beautiful.

ole s's picture
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Joined: 1 Feb 2002 - 4:01am
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All caps followed by all lowercase? Doesn’t quite work. Have you tried to stack em’? Might be more usable this way.
Weights need a bit of work. BEN BARNES should be a bit heavier. BBG with secondary line of text “ben barnes group”
might be worth trying as well.
I agree with the comment by Daniel about the ARN kerning issues.
LC p is beautiful.