Please be brutal!
The emphasis and excitement is in the “group” It is obvious that the emphasis nees to be shifted to “Ben Barnes”. Also you have chosen a tough group of letters to kern cleanly
All caps followed by all lowercase? Doesn’t quite work. Have you tried to stack em’? Might be more usable this way. Weights need a bit of work. BEN BARNES should be a bit heavier. BBG with secondary line of text “ben barnes group” might be worth trying as well. I agree with the comment by Daniel about the ARN kerning issues. LC p is beautiful.