Something I did by the morning coffee. I know it’s a bit early to post here but I’ll be developing this during the fall and you can comment when you feel like it. This might some day replace Peignot in a logo.
The 'A' is quite wide, compared to the rest.
The curves look a little dark to me. Overcompensating? The tail on K and R looks rather light. Also the U looks narrow. Do those critiques seem fair?