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Bertjan Tromp's picture
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Joined: 1 Nov 2003 - 8:01am
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Here’s something i made last year. I’m thinking about working on it again but also about dropping it on the trashcan. Any comments?

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Joined: 15 Feb 2004 - 3:49am
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I think this looks very cool. Definitly usable.
In general I think the uppercase should follow the lowercase more when it is possible.
I would make the bottom of the “E” like in “C”, to get it more fluent.
I would find another solution for the “S”, it looks a bit affected…
Try connecting the “K”.
You could try something like in “Z” on the “Y”.
And maybe make the whole thing a bit bolder…

Cheers!

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Joined: 1 Nov 2003 - 8:01am
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Thanks for your comments Tobias. Here’s an update:

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Thats right. Now the only thing i can think of to change is the tail of the Q, which doesnt fit the “grid”. Maybe it could be a horizontal stroke, not connected. Perhaps also stick to just one type of W and S in lower- and uppercase..
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