You need to redraw the crown of his hat to make it symmetrical, the righthand side has a greater radius than the left. Is this for the porn star or is it another joke?
Thanks for the crit guys, like I mentioned it was a joke, thus being something I made up. I might play with it some more. I like the ideas of the shoes.
timd: His right hand? I only see one hand :D
wormwood: ill try moving the hat further away but I dont want to off balance it to the left to much.
1.May.2007 4.19pm
Looks Hebrew.
hhp
1.May.2007 4.33pm
can you give any background on the company, etc? as far as a blank critique we really can’t offer anything unless you give us some background.
1.May.2007 4.39pm
Reminds me of the Cassandre Dubonnet Posters.
1.May.2007 4.41pm
If the joke is the allusion to sodomy then maybe you should make his arse more attractive.
I would try moving the hat away from the arm a little to give him some more head space.
His arm looks a bit too thick.
Have you tried some curves on the legs?
1.May.2007 4.51pm
Good call Miss Tiffany.
Maybe Mr Dover would look good in those shoes.
2.May.2007 7.05am
You need to redraw the crown of his hat to make it symmetrical, the righthand side has a greater radius than the left. Is this for the porn star or is it another joke?
Tim
8.May.2007 4.55pm
Thanks for the crit guys, like I mentioned it was a joke, thus being something I made up. I might play with it some more. I like the ideas of the shoes.
timd: His right hand? I only see one hand :D
wormwood: ill try moving the hat further away but I dont want to off balance it to the left to much.
9.May.2007 1.37pm
ill try moving the hat further away but I dont want to off balance it to the left to much
Try just moving his hat up then and don’t move it left at all.
This logo is very different in style to your illustration work on your website.
I especially like ’Lamphead’.
11.May.2007 10.45am
I laugh a little inside every time I see you post this retoid.