Crit my logo (sort of a joke)

retoid
1.May.2007 3.06pm
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This is sort of a joke :D (no offense to anyone)

Crit my logo.



hrant
1.May.2007 4.19pm
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Looks Hebrew.

hhp


feldhouse
1.May.2007 4.33pm
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can you give any background on the company, etc? as far as a blank critique we really can’t offer anything unless you give us some background.


Miss Tiffany
1.May.2007 4.39pm
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Reminds me of the Cassandre Dubonnet Posters.


wormwood
1.May.2007 4.41pm
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If the joke is the allusion to sodomy then maybe you should make his arse more attractive.

I would try moving the hat away from the arm a little to give him some more head space.

His arm looks a bit too thick.

Have you tried some curves on the legs?


wormwood
1.May.2007 4.51pm
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Good call Miss Tiffany.


Maybe Mr Dover would look good in those shoes.


timd
2.May.2007 7.05am
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You need to redraw the crown of his hat to make it symmetrical, the righthand side has a greater radius than the left. Is this for the porn star or is it another joke?

Tim


retoid
8.May.2007 4.55pm
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Thanks for the crit guys, like I mentioned it was a joke, thus being something I made up. I might play with it some more. I like the ideas of the shoes.

timd: His right hand? I only see one hand :D

wormwood: ill try moving the hat further away but I dont want to off balance it to the left to much.


wormwood
9.May.2007 1.37pm
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ill try moving the hat further away but I dont want to off balance it to the left to much

Try just moving his hat up then and don’t move it left at all.

This logo is very different in style to your illustration work on your website.
I especially like ’Lamphead’.


jselig
11.May.2007 10.45am
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I laugh a little inside every time I see you post this retoid.