Ready for critique

koleslaw
22.Aug.2007 9.41pm
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I’ve been tweaking for a while now and I think it’s ready for a review.
Here it is. A graffiti inspired, legible, stylish handwriting font.
First true attempt at a sellable font.

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glyphobet
22.Aug.2007 9.50pm
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I wouldn’t advertise this as “graffiti-inspired” — even if it is. It looks a lot more like comic book lettering to me.

-m


koleslaw
23.Aug.2007 8.33am
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Thanks. Maybe I didn’t flare it up enough, but I meant it to be comic-bookish with a definite street flava.


koleslaw
24.Aug.2007 9.16pm
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Any help? anyone?


Bendy
4.Sep.2007 2.38pm
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i like it! fun! i agree with comic book rather than graffiti though.


litera
23.Sep.2007 4.08pm
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well the “e”s and “a”s are too light for me. “x” probably too but it’s not within a text block.

The ones that seem to heavy are: D and 5.

I normally don’t like the back slant, but I guess it goes well with this font. Someone else may judge it from this point because my judgement isn’t the right one here.

What about letter-spacing? Does it seem to tight to me or is there anyone else that can confirm this?