Handwritten Logo Critique

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Joined: 25 Jul 2007 - 1:37am
Handwritten Logo Critique
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hello there,

i'd love some feedback on a logo for a little collective i'm involved with. i've played with the curves and i'm not yet happy with it. some fresh eyes and opinion would be appreciated.

thanks!

vin

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Joined: 11 Sep 2003 - 9:04am
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Initial reaction is they look good, points I would look at are the vertical stroke of the R I feel it should flare to the left rather than right and possibly work in a closed loop where the counter and leg meet; work on the second o – it is slightly cramped; slightly close up the fto combination; try a thinner connecting stroke on op or maybe a more exuberant stroke – it is rather straight compared with some of the others; and possibly make the counter of the p a little wider.

Tim

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Joined: 20 Mar 2006 - 12:29pm
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I think it's really nice. I agree with Tim to spend some time on the second o. In addition I think the space between t and o is much to wide.

Best,
Juergen

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Joined: 15 Sep 2005 - 2:36pm
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my take:
i like the R in version 3 better than versions 1 or 2. i don't think its flare is a problem - rather it feels in keeping with the movement of the rest of the type. again, second 'o' needs tweaking, as others said.

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Joined: 25 Jul 2007 - 1:37am
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thanks so much for your comments. i'll have another fiddle and repost.

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Joined: 4 Aug 2007 - 1:01pm
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I vote number two but i would move the "top" slightly the to the left and fix the P at the end as it's starting to look a little too much like an R to me. Really just my taste I suppose. Other than that I think it looks really great.

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Joined: 25 Jul 2007 - 1:37am
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sorry about the delay in reposting.
here are the latest adjustments taking in to account people's comments.
thanks so much for the critique.

i love this place.