Hi, this is the first thing Im working on...and Im sure you all have sugetiosn and opions, I have no school on this dark art and i basicly let my self go. I really want to learn but i have no guidance.
I think the biggest issue I have with this typeface is the overuse of your embellishment. It seems forced and unnecessary in most places, especially the lowercase. I'd try removing it from all but a few lc letters and consider reworking some of the uppercase for a more consistent placement.
I think this is a beautiful display face in the right setting - I'm sure there's a great logotype waiting to happen in here!
I would really like to see how it works with some other short pieces of copy - this face is obviously more suited to a couple of words at a time, rather than the block of text above...
Thanks for your comments.... they keep me on working!!! i've all ready made a logo with it... check my website at the "personal" section... first image is the logo... www.romstudio.com.mx
18 Oct 2007 — 11:34am
Hmmm, no response yet. My 2 cents:
I think the biggest issue I have with this typeface is the overuse of your embellishment. It seems forced and unnecessary in most places, especially the lowercase. I'd try removing it from all but a few lc letters and consider reworking some of the uppercase for a more consistent placement.
27 Nov 2007 — 4:49pm
The word "Colette" looks great in this face. I've heard before thats what was said about
Avant Garde at one point. stay in there!
Chase Langdon
5 Dec 2007 — 11:44am
I think this is a beautiful display face in the right setting - I'm sure there's a great logotype waiting to happen in here!
I would really like to see how it works with some other short pieces of copy - this face is obviously more suited to a couple of words at a time, rather than the block of text above...
Great work, love it!
17 Dec 2007 — 11:41am
Thanks for your comments.... they keep me on working!!! i've all ready made a logo with it... check my website at the "personal" section... first image is the logo... www.romstudio.com.mx
21 Dec 2007 — 9:32am
Yeah it would be really nice to have a plain version too. So you could mix and match the embellishments for longer pieces of copy.