ROM's picture

Hi, this is the first thing Im working on...and Im sure you all have sugetiosn and opions, I have no school on this dark art and i basicly let my self go. I really want to learn but i have no guidance.

Thank you all!


Ken Messenger's picture

Hmmm, no response yet. My 2 cents:

I think the biggest issue I have with this typeface is the overuse of your embellishment. It seems forced and unnecessary in most places, especially the lowercase. I'd try removing it from all but a few lc letters and consider reworking some of the uppercase for a more consistent placement.

Chasography's picture

The word "Colette" looks great in this face. I've heard before thats what was said about
Avant Garde at one point. stay in there!
Chase Langdon

genericboy's picture

I think this is a beautiful display face in the right setting - I'm sure there's a great logotype waiting to happen in here!

I would really like to see how it works with some other short pieces of copy - this face is obviously more suited to a couple of words at a time, rather than the block of text above...

Great work, love it!

ROM's picture

Thanks for your comments.... they keep me on working!!! i've all ready made a logo with it... check my website at the "personal" section... first image is the logo...

HaleyFiege's picture

Yeah it would be really nice to have a plain version too. So you could mix and match the embellishments for longer pieces of copy.

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