critique this page out of a booklet

mandatorycannibalism
25.Oct.2007 7.06am
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this is a page im working on for a cd booklet in one of my classes.

how the layout? colors? font? etc...

your help will greatly appreciated



poms
25.Oct.2007 7.31am
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You forgot the link.


mandatorycannibalism
25.Oct.2007 6.32pm
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fixed the first post


gdkid2004
3.Jan.2008 5.11pm
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seems like an old post, but I’d like to point out some obvious problems.

1. The line length is too long
2. If the bottom of the italic title for the 3 piece is lined up with the third line, why not the first two. I don’t understand the significance of putting the titles one line below the numbers.
3. Depends on what sort of paper size you’re printing on, the point size could be a bit smaller.

I like the color and the font itself.