Thanks for the input before, http://typophile.com/node/40047, i thought I'd make a new thread to get it noticed.
I have modified it and I would like to know what you all think. Legibility and the 'colour' are of importance, I don't want some looking too dark.
There will be no lowercase as this typeface is intended for use on the back of football shirts.
I look forward to hearing from you.