Nice work Charles! Kind of an unusual name, but it catches your attention.

Stephen

That’s beautiful!

Sharon

Lovely lettering.
(But, the ’tagline’ doesn’t really work for me. I would probably consider choosing a sans serif and setting the line straight, instead.)

Dav(id)

I have to agree with dav. The lettering is very nice, but the tagline would indeed look better if you use a sans serif in a straight line, probably aligned to the right of the lettering or otherwise next to the B below onkers.

dav(2)

Thanks Stephen. Ignore the email I sent you. Sharon, and the two Davs, Thanks. I actually did not care for having the tagline. I showed her 6 options. Some were as you mentioned. But I must say I sure had fun lettering this :)