Splash Screen for Type Website

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Wanda Rodriguez's picture
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Splash Screen for Type Website
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This is for a class. I’m creating a splash page for a typography website.
please critique

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Thanks

Hrant H Papazian's picture
Joined: 3 May 2000 - 11:00am
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Pretty nice!
Probably use a font with less contrast, maybe blockier, like Charter? And tweak the spacing: “RT”, “TY”, “RA” and “HY” too loose, “OG” too tight.

hhp

Stephen Coles's picture
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Joined: 14 May 2001 - 11:00am
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I think the purpose might be better served by
focusing on the typography rather than the
imagery. Tone down the background some.

The metal ‘A’ is a nice touch.

Wanda Rodriguez's picture
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Joined: 4 Dec 2002 - 11:00am
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I found that the background is overpowering the title. Took everyones advice. I darkened the background. And used a block serif font

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I still think the background images overpower the type. I bet you could strip out a few layers and still have a nice piece.