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oups, the jpg was in cmyk,

here it is

a people circus,

www.cirque-eloize.com

Éloize means: a night by the beach thunder in a north region of Quebec.
It is a slang word. It is not a big ''BANG''. It is more a thunder with
little noise that create a lot of light in the sky.

sample needs to be bigger, and you might get more feedback that way.

also, it should be in the critique section, and you only need to start one thread. :)

that said .... :)

• Bottom horizontal stroke on the C seems too short.

• stress on the O is completely different than the C and Q above. Not sure that you
need the angled stress on the O.

• Cirque colors light compared to Eloize, not sure if that's your intention. Cirque feels like it's too small.

• kerning needs some work. Compare the E-L combo, for example, to the O-I.

• the Z-E seems like it would work better if the Z was longer and extended further right, which would also help narrow the large gap.

• The tail on the Q ... maybe it should mimic the Z?

best of luck eric.

thanks guys,

these are really good comments.

Now, back to work