Pakline logo critique

Kyrus
30.May.2008 8.37am

Hello.

First of all I’m new here, so hello to everyone, great forum you have here.

Now back to the topic. I’m designing a logotype for a company that produces and sells medical devices. We’re gonna have a a new line now tho, and we’re needing a logo for it. This line is called “Pakline” and it’s purpose is to include several products into one pack (eg. Surgical procedure pack). The following are the logotypes we designed so far.

Any critique would be appreciated, along with some ideas for new concepts.

Thank you.
Pedro Peixoto

AzizMostafa
30.May.2008 8.57am

http://www.piac.com.pk
Just Kidding with Flowers

hola
30.May.2008 1.02pm

what is the “by” suppose to signify? I like #6 without the little “by” icon. I like the enclosure and interaction of Pakline and square and rectangle. If you made the solid green rectangle a tiny bit longer on the bottom you might a pretty nice “P” concept out of both open square and rectangle.

AGL
2.Jun.2008 9.29am

I like # 10. Has movement. The rotated square would be better a couple of points up. Maybe the box all in green if you like that.

ryan.bruner
3.Jun.2008 1.50am

I personally like #10 both typographically and compositionally. But I think there is a stronger figure/ground relationship in #1 with the B and y. But that makes me question what that means exactly, like hola mentioned.

Kyrus
3.Jun.2008 4.14am

Hello and thank you for your comments.

BV is a registered label that has to be attached to this logo, so I can’t cut it out. I’ve made some changes this morning, mostly towards the simplicity. Got two new examples to show and would appreciate further comments as always.