I have never posted here before and offer this thread to you as a plea for help. I admire the level of expertise visible on this board.
I am working on a personal logo and, although I have gotten it where I am suitably happy, areas of the script and swashes I have drawn feel clearly off for reasons I do not have the capacity to articulate. It is posted below in the hopes that I can be guided in the general direction to resolve this (as it is totally bugging the hell out of me).
Below is an image and attached is a PDF, for anyone who cares to look at it. Thanks!
Any comments on the logo generally are completely welcome, it's for my own portfolio / business cards etc.