smk27's picture

Hello everyone :)
I've just registered in Typophile, and I'm a third year graphic design student at the American university of Beirut, Lebanon.

I'm working on my logo, and my identity as a designer, and since I'm interested in Arabic type, I made my logo in a way that reflects this interest.

I'm just looking for some feedback from non-Arabs, because I feel it would be very helpful and beneficial to me.

my picture is attached (there was a problem inserting the image)

Looking forward for any reply.

Thank you :)

Picture 4.png22.67 KB
Saad Abulhab's picture

Hello Sulaf

welcome aboard! I loved your logo: it has harmony and style. Since you want people to remember the name correctly in their mind, I think you should alter the Seen which looks like Raa now. A hint of teeth may be one way, but probably best would be to have the pointy stem pointing south west!


AzizMostafa's picture

1. Welcome Solaf with Flowers
2. Better sharpen the meeting point of L+A (la) so that it looks like a bird:
3. Make the Seen Long enough to take care of the boaty Fa and birdie La.
4. Happy Designing

smk27's picture

hey :)
thank you for your feedback :)
I'll work on the things you pointed out, and if any major alterations happen I'll update you :)

thanks again!!

Syndicate content Syndicate content