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Hi, i wanted to show you something i was playing with few days ago.
Comments appreciated, criticisms are welcome.
Looks like you have a story for that, but the relation between the subject of your post and the image you are showing is not clear to me.
I don't like the floating word, the last A leaning against the radiator is cool though. Have you tried doing the same with the other letters? They could possibly be of varying sizes, or some closer to the camera, lying on the floor etc.
Also there is a little black thing on the right skirting board that needs removed.