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How's my Kerning?
Posted by RyanSimpson in
16 Apr 2009 — 8:00am
16 Apr 2009 — 8:00am
Hey guys, I'm working on a logo for a children's creative playspace and boutique.
How do guys feel about this logo I'm working on and more importantly how is my kerning?
Thanks!
Ryan
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16 Apr 2009 — 9:46am
The only bit that springs out at me is the se gap.
Will
16 Apr 2009 — 11:25am
"play" appears to be kerned tighter than "house". At the very least the kerning on both sides of 'o' looks a bit loose.
16 Apr 2009 — 10:07pm
My first impression was that the mark is too close to the P. It's the edge of the roof that comes too close; have you tried slightly tilting the house on it's axis to the left? Just enough so the gutter doesn't butt against the P's serif.
Oh, and what font is that? I can't place it. It's nice.
20 Apr 2009 — 11:21am
The font is Nexus Mix Bold.
http://www.fontshop.com/fonts/downloads/fontfont/ff_nexus_mix/
Thanks for the critique guys, I'll revise it and post it again.