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Posted by MrKikkoman in
16 May 2009 — 10:07pm

I'm trying to make an identity for my "art company" which is just a brand for my art.. like Obey. I chose to hand draw a logo. Any thoughts?

- It reads, Eggroll Industries

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zevbiz
17 May 2009 — 9:27pm
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I read it as:

Eggroll
Indius
Tries

creativemilk
17 May 2009 — 10:14pm
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I clicked on the attachment BEFORE reading your post. And I couldn't figure out that the bottom word spells Industries. It made me read Indius Tries, too.

Edit: But I really like the entire concept and writing.

MrKikkoman
19 May 2009 — 5:41pm
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hm okay, I had a couple of other people say that too. I tried to fit it like
Eggroll
Indus
Tries

because it fits better than
Eggroll
Industries

I'll try pulling that i down.

Thanks

Lefty
20 May 2009 — 3:22pm
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Same way here

Eggroll
Indius
Tries

The hand writing is very cool, just need a little fix with the "i" and linking Industries maybe a "-" (?)

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