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Joined: 27 May 2008 - 11:34am
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Hi everyone,
I've been working on this poster, I've fiddling around with it so much, and have come up with something pretty unsatisfactory.
I can't see where else to go with it at the moment, and was hoping for a bit of guidance.

Its an A3 poster, aimed at people interested in all sorts of design.
I wanted to achieve a stylish, typographic layout, but could do with a little help, after looking at it for too long! Theres a lot of content to shoehorn in.

Many thanks

Toby

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Joined: 18 Feb 2008 - 7:14am
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My first thought would be that it needs to be a lot simpler. Less clutter would allow for the typography to speak for itself.
Also it may be me but i am not a fan of the cap A.

Will

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Joined: 14 May 2009 - 2:14pm
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Looks little cluttered to me too.

The photo makes it looks a little heavy at the top left with it bleeding.
In keeping with the typographic layout concept, maybe?:

Something is distracting about the colon after 'SHIPLEY LATES:' to me...

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Joined: 26 Jan 2009 - 2:10pm
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is the photo necessary? i guess the colon looks like it wanted to be centered veritcally.