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[logo] Grupa Interaktywni
Posted by smylek in
10 Nov 2009 — 3:59pm
10 Nov 2009 — 3:59pm
Hello,
I am looking for some critique.
This is a logo proposal for the company Grupa Interaktywni. They make corporate identity, websites etc.
What do you guys think?
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10 Nov 2009 — 6:04pm
sure.
you're going to have to give us more to work with to get anything constructive.
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Paul
Design Studio Melbourne
11 Nov 2009 — 1:43am
The windmill mark is nice, but overall the composition feels crowded and unbalanced.
11 Nov 2009 — 3:39am
I have made more space between the mark and text.
I think it looks better now.
11 Nov 2009 — 4:14am
I think the word 'GRUPA' might get lost if you use the whole logo at a small size.
Also I'm having a slight problem reading the logo. It might be because it's in a foreign language, but I wonder if the problem isn't helped by the use of all caps. Maybe try it without the use of caps, or perhaps space out 'INTERAKTYWNI' a little.
Hope that helps.
11 Nov 2009 — 4:48am
Yes, you have the problem with reading because it is a polish language. I don't think there is a problem for Poles. But thanks.
11 Nov 2009 — 5:15am
And this is final logo with color. Hope you like it.
11 Nov 2009 — 8:24am
Does anyone else find it odd that he is making a logo for a company that makes logos?
Anyways...
I still think it could use some more spacing adjustments in INTERAKTYWNI. Not a fan of the colors but it could just be a cultural thing.
11 Nov 2009 — 9:39am
I'm not sure why, but it looks a bit like a logo for a new bank trying to look very serious. :-\
Colors: I think their difference in darkness/saturation can work for the mark, but not so well in the type – GRUPA seems too active/strong compared to INTERAKTYWNI.
Spacing: Can anything be done about the holes in there (look at "KTY"!)? You should at least *try* loosening the rest of the spacing to get it more-or-less even. But maybe it's too loose then. I guess a higher-class thing to attempt would be a T_Y ligature.
Glyphs: Some seem too dark. The "W" needs help, and the "K". But that sort of stuff is hard to tell at this size. What font is that anyway?
11 Nov 2009 — 9:43am
Don't mean to sound evil, but looks like it could be Arial.
Briän
11 Nov 2009 — 9:45am
That's exactly why I asked.
11 Nov 2009 — 10:28am
I think I'd like the mark without the dots (just the bars).
11 Nov 2009 — 12:05pm
That would make the i's in the mark go away.
11 Nov 2009 — 12:08pm
That would make the i’s in the mark go away.
No, they'd just be capital :p
penn