This needs alot of work. All comments welcome.
chevon please tell us details about the logo, in wich area do they work, because if itn is a kindergarden it seems very creepy to me. CG
<font class=”dontLookLikeCrap”>Yeah if this is for a rock concert, a book, a movie, it could make a great, beautiful mark. I think your drawing is well done. If this is for babies, you might want to soften it up a bit, cause it kinda wants to kill me. Context is key. Though it does look good. Aaron</font> oh man, that would be an AWESOME concert!
This has gotta be for a band or something like that I think. Looks great I think, reminds me of something thats been on this forum before but I cant think what…
on a purely technical standpoint, i think you might wanna iron out those kinks in your swashies. As they are now they look a little mechanical/inorganic. I think some nice smooth swashes would give great balance to the heavily angular letters. just my two bits.
Thanks for the comments. Yes, I want to get all of the kinks ironed out in the swashes — good point. What I’m really concerned with is trying to ﬁgure out the “logic” of the letters and how they relate to each other. I want to make sure all of the letters follow the same rules and look like they came from the same typeface — that is, of course, except for the capital “B” and “S”. The client is a design agency and they want the logo to look like a cigar box logo — not for kids!
The E seems to be out place. It’s missing some spurs and curves. The capital B is also somewhat diﬃcult the to read. I recommend busting out some circles and perfecting those curves as well.