d0mino
1.Mar.2010 2.47pm
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Hello,

I have been working on a poster design, the type is purposefully abstract, but I would still like it to be legible to some degree.

Any thoughts or feedback would be appriciated.

Below I have attached the poster and some details.

http://operationeveryday.com/files/gimgs/206_wet3.jpg

http://operationeveryday.com/files/gimgs/206_wet4.jpg

http://operationeveryday.com/files/gimgs/206_wet5.jpg

aluminum
1.Mar.2010 3.16pm
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Whoa...that's impressive! I'm not sure what kind of feedback you are looking for, but while I can't read the first image, there definitely appears to be some sort of letterforms there.


eliason
1.Mar.2010 3.21pm
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"we are water"?

It is legible to a very, very small degree.


d0mino
2.Mar.2010 7.31pm
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I think it needs some supporting copy to go with it.


riccard0
3.Mar.2010 1.38am
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I would make it even more flowing, if possible. Even if it makes it less legible.