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Hello,
I have been working on a poster design, the type is purposefully abstract, but I would still like it to be legible to some degree.
Any thoughts or feedback would be appriciated.
Below I have attached the poster and some details.
http://operationeveryday.com/files/gimgs/206_wet3.jpg
1 Mar 2010 — 3:16pm
Whoa...that's impressive! I'm not sure what kind of feedback you are looking for, but while I can't read the first image, there definitely appears to be some sort of letterforms there.
1 Mar 2010 — 3:21pm
"we are water"?
It is legible to a very, very small degree.
2 Mar 2010 — 7:31pm
I think it needs some supporting copy to go with it.
3 Mar 2010 — 1:38am
I would make it even more flowing, if possible. Even if it makes it less legible.
11 Sep 2012 — 11:03pm
Crazy. I like it.
18 Oct 2012 — 11:34am
Cool work! but in my opinion you need to make the letters more legible, just a bit!