Modified Script critique

Hello all,

I am working on a logo design for a photographer. I am finally to playing with beziers. I'd like some feedback on my progress. Attached is a little process of the modifications.

Let me know if you think something is too much or too little or if you have other suggestions. I want it to feel a little more natural, but mostly to just feel "right" if that makes sense.



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evanmacdonald's picture

No thoughts? Any one?

Justin_Ch's picture

I like the second "Jaquilyn", apart from the q, and the third "Shumate". Perhaps the tail of y could also be straight to match horizontal strokes on the h and t. The q looks like it wants to be slanted and looks uncomfortable amongst all the other upright letters. Very nice, but does this retro-look suit her work?

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