Please critique this Typography!

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Diego Macchi's picture
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Joined: 24 Aug 2010 - 6:56pm
Please critique this Typography!
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Hello! ,

I´m designing my first typography and I would like to listen to experts opinions because Im planning on presenting it on a type expo.

Thanks in advance , Looking forward to read you comments.

Cheers!

Diego

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Joined: 8 Aug 2010 - 12:14pm
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Looks good, but your capital Q's ( on both sets ) have a mistake ( looks like a barb) and are a bit misshapen on the stick thingy coming off of it.

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Joined: 8 Aug 2010 - 12:14pm
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The O is a bit pointy at the bottom, and the second serif on the capital E has a small nub on it

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Joined: 26 Jul 2010 - 10:10am
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Was it your intention to have the Ball terminal be larger on the 2 than in the other numerals? Overall Nice type!