Chunky brushed script piece

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Frode Bo Helland's picture
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 - 1:03pm
Chunky brushed script piece
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Just a lettering piece I’m working on. I’m not to familiar with brush scripts. Do you spot any obvious mistakes, or do you have some suggestions for improvements?

Penn Glendinning's picture
Joined: 25 Jul 2008 - 1:09pm
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The 'i' seems pretty low / small compared to the rest — so much so that I thought it was a swash from the character to its right. Also, the sharp ends on the 't' aren't present in any of the other characters.

Femke Engelse's picture
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Joined: 19 May 2010 - 3:47am
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The whole thing looks like it's in perspective. I don't know if that's just the smallness of the i and the height of the t, but it looks like the word is angled towards me.

Frode Bo Helland's picture
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 - 1:03pm
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Thanks guys. No need to comment more. Twas just a quick thingy that I'll do much better the next time.