Wedding Save the Date: A more legible "S" and general critique

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Good afternoon to all my type-lovers. I'm designing my wedding collateral and have here the first of many. My fiencé says she sees an F instead of an S in Sarah, so I'm hoping for suggestions on how to get a better S.

I believe a more pronounced lower spine would do the trick, but it would disrupt the stress/angle of the font. Solutions and suggestions welcome.

In general, Sarah is looking for something intimately elegant, vintage (yet not trendy vintage), and with bold damask whispers for the look and feel of the wedding. Suggestions are welcome!

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