Critique My Person Wordmark (Part 2)

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Critique My Person Wordmark (Part 2)
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Hi,

This is a long-awaited revision to my personal wordmark; you can find the first version on Typophile in this node. This wordmark represents my initials which I am hoping the viewer can interpret clearly right away (they are posted in the O.P. of the above node if you cannot).

New version:

http://i51.tinypic.com/2m4u2zc.jpg

I love how it looks right now, but I will also take into account any (constructive) feedback.

~ corey

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Joined: 30 May 2010 - 10:36am
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Hi, I think it's too wide;it doesn't remind me of CV,more like DOV.

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Joined: 24 Nov 2008 - 11:50pm
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I too think it reads DAV rather unambiguously. Nice curves and the choice of color nonetheless.

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Joined: 25 Jul 2008 - 1:09pm
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I'm afraid it's 'DAV' for me as well. Perhaps there could be a larger break where the top of the 'C' comes down to form the crossbar of the 'A'?

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Joined: 27 May 2009 - 3:24am
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Thanks for all the comments. Below are revisions where I made the space between the gaps a little wider.

a)

http://i55.tinypic.com/w133oh.jpg

b)

http://i54.tinypic.com/5po7fa.jpg

c)

http://i53.tinypic.com/28a10ty.jpg

~ corey

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Bump.

Sebastian von Bischopink's picture
Joined: 12 May 2005 - 3:55am
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Unfortunately not seeing the 'C' at all, why not cut the upper part?
I also think that the corners needs some work - they seem slightly chubby.

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Thanks for all of the feedback; I will create a new node with my revisions at a later date.