Feedback on hand lettered congratulations card?

typeheart's picture

This is a draft of the front side of a congratulations card for a corporate client.

Inspired by and a tribute to some of Herb Lubalin's gorgeous script pieces.

I'd love any feedback/critique! Thanks.

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riccard0's picture

I think you should move the thread to Critique > Typography / Composition

Anyway, I like it overall, but it lacks flowing in places (g, most notably).

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