Feedback on hand lettered congratulations card?

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Feedback on hand lettered congratulations card?
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This is a draft of the front side of a congratulations card for a corporate client.

Inspired by and a tribute to some of Herb Lubalin's gorgeous script pieces.

I'd love any feedback/critique! Thanks.

Riccardo Sartori's picture
Joined: 13 Jul 2009 - 4:20am
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I think you should move the thread to Critique > Typography / Composition

Anyway, I like it overall, but it lacks flowing in places (g, most notably).