Critique needed, Kor Till Attack

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Martin Löfqvist's picture
Joined: 7 Nov 2004 - 6:34am
Critique needed, Kor Till Attack
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Hi,
this is my first attempt on drawing a typeface. I’m having trouble with y, v and w. Any suggestions on the design is welcome.


André Simard's picture
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Joined: 25 Nov 2004 - 12:11pm
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I made some rough sketch of the letters who give you trouble.

Hoping those sketches will help you to step in front

Dan Reynolds's picture
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Joined: 20 Jul 2002 - 11:00am
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Your “o” is clunky. It looks too monoline, which makes the top and the bottom appear too heavy. Try to modulate the stroke more.

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Joined: 20 Feb 2002 - 11:00am
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Martin, have you ever seen a typeface named ‘VAG Rounded’ before.?