Critique needed, Kor Till Attack

Posted by martinlofqvist in

19 Dec 2004 — 4:07am

Hi,
this is my first attempt on drawing a typeface. I'm having trouble with y, v and w. Any suggestions on the design is welcome.

I made some rough sketch of the letters who give you trouble.

Hoping those sketches will help you to step in front

Your "o" is clunky. It looks too monoline, which makes the top and the bottom appear too heavy. Try to modulate the stroke more.

Martin, have you ever seen a typeface named 'VAG Rounded' before.?

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