Critique needed, Kor Till Attack

martinlofqvist's picture

Hi,
this is my first attempt on drawing a typeface. I'm having trouble with y, v and w. Any suggestions on the design is welcome.


sim's picture

I made some rough sketch of the letters who give you trouble.

Hoping those sketches will help you to step in front

dan_reynolds's picture

Your "o" is clunky. It looks too monoline, which makes the top and the bottom appear too heavy. Try to modulate the stroke more.

Dav's picture

Martin, have you ever seen a typeface named 'VAG Rounded' before.?

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