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Hi everybody,
just because it has a lot to do with the typography, I’ll make me bold and post a logotype I made for 4th Virtual Biennale of Graphic Design, which was held by AUG – the topic was ‘Discrimination‘ and as usual, submitted posters had to be just in black and white. And that’s why I decided to make a simple typographic logotype, using Tomáš Brousil’s Comenia Sans typeface.
Eventhough it has been already published, I will be pleased to read any comments and critics, while feedback is always very welcome!
Thanks, JT

(the first line is in Czech)
25 May 2011 — 11:16pm
Though spotting a lot of dots, I can’t see the point.
30 May 2011 — 12:25am
This looks like a discrimination to /i/.
I like it even though I'd rather choose a different font with less round shapes and squared dots on /i/. This would make a better blend of dot and /s/ or /o/.
But otherwise it's a very nice idea and makes the point of discrimination. Very well done indeed.
30 May 2011 — 3:52am
I don’t think this is a good idea at all.
It is a very simple optical gag, the ligation/contraction of the i’s body.
Very nice.
What has this to do with discrimination?
There’s not really wit in it.
30 May 2011 — 1:33pm
clever concept, the execution can be improved.
30 May 2011 — 2:24pm
> It is a very simple optical gag
I would say it is too simple to be interesting or memorable.