Typeface in progress

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Alexander Lins's picture
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Typeface in progress
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Dear forum members,

This is a typeface in progress (Thin version) - at this point, kerning etc. is only very basic.

What I need in terms of critique and feedback is a general first impression when you look at the attached PDF. Of course any other - maybe more detailed feedback - would be very much appreciated!

Thank you.
Alex

Jasper Michael de Waard's picture
Joined: 24 Apr 2008 - 10:32am
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This is already quite good. IMO all you need is some character. Try to add some personality to it.

Alexis Luengas Zimmer's picture
Joined: 23 Feb 2011 - 1:30pm
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I do recognize some personality in the slight rectangularity of the round shapes (e.g. O, ). Experiment exaggerating that feature. That would be your starting point, I'd say. Good Work! There's not much to comment, it's a minimalistic design.

Alexander Lins's picture
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Joined: 23 Jan 2003 - 8:19pm
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Thank you very much for the valuable input and feedback!

Joe Prince's picture
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Joined: 6 Feb 2011 - 1:55am
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Maybe it's just me, but I'd say what you did is an exercise in creating a font heavily based off Gotham.

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Joined: 16 Dec 2010 - 8:57am
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/Sacker's Gothic.