As seen here, I've been modifying the B from Erato Light in an attempt to recreate this exotic letterform. I would like now you to be constructively critic on it. I'll be grateful for any suggestions.
The word Bruna is just a dummy. I've experimented a different R too, as a way of balancing the extra weight of the new B. Does that even make any sense? Opinions on it will be welcome.
Below, Erato Light, the modified B and the modified B e R, respectively.