Thoughts on this new font I am creating, please?

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Adrian Valenzuela's picture
Joined: 4 Sep 2012 - 11:31am
Thoughts on this new font I am creating, please?
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It is inspired by a mix of Limelight and Bodoni. Just started, but would like to get some feedback.

I am calling it Pavilion.


Victor Curran's picture
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Joined: 31 Dec 2008 - 3:34pm
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It's fun, I'm looking forward to seeing more. My only comment at this point is that the serifs at the end of the thin strokes on L and N look too insubstantial to balance the thick strokes. I don't feel that way about the A and the V, maybe because the serifs have a little more heft, or maybe because the thin stroke isn't quite as thin (and on the A, it gets thicker toward the serif).

Adrian Valenzuela's picture
Joined: 4 Sep 2012 - 11:31am
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You are right, the N looks fragile. I will give the serif some more heft. You gave me an idea for the L as well.

Hrant H Papazian's picture
Joined: 3 May 2000 - 11:00am
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I like it.

hhp

Luma Vine's picture
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Joined: 1 Jun 2010 - 1:16pm
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Yea this has tons of potential.