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Logo for summit
Posted by manyaldesign in
5 Nov 2012 — 4:28am
5 Nov 2012 — 4:28am
Something is wrong with the typography and colors, any remarks and suggestion?
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5 Nov 2012 — 6:10am
The "AS" connection is very wobbly.
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5 Nov 2012 — 6:46am
thanks for the comment hrant. Any alternative font suggestion for both? something modern and it need to look better than this:
5 Nov 2012 — 11:13am
The stars bug me; they are drawn with different styles (one flat, one dimensional) and they seem redundant. Might be better if there was a way to make it work with just one star.
Also I don't particularly care for the swashes (or whatever you'd call them), but if you're going to use them a curve would fit the globe better, right now they seem to have a fold.
5 Nov 2012 — 11:03pm
how about this one
compare the text size to this
about looking folded, I don't intent to change it as for right now. I'm more concern about the color combination. Thanks for the critiques!
6 Nov 2012 — 4:45pm
Feedback on your concept.
Clipart overkill! Suggestion: you could make it a lot simpler by sticking to the rising star concept.
Do people often refer to the summit as WAS? Or do you want them to? Because if not, why not just stick with the full name. (No more scaling problems either.)