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Hello, I'm working on a few different beer logos. I'd love some feedback.
The first, Miraculum, is a hoppy IPA with a viney & floral hand drawn mark.
http://cl.ly/image/3k3f0b003501
The second, Cadre, is a smooth brown ale, displayed as a curvy black letter.
http://cl.ly/image/1A423t2g0b08
The third, Villain, is a red IPA that's shown in a minimalistic comic book style, similar to sin city.
http://cl.ly/image/1n160M0u142l
The final mark, Grand Pryes, is a cream ale shown here in a reflective, half dressed, robust serif font.
http://cl.ly/image/3u0O2D2u2W2R
- Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
Ben
4 Dec 2012 — 10:49pm
Feel free to make edits to these extremely large images and repost, if you'd like.
Thanks again,
Ben
7 Dec 2012 — 8:32am
anyone?
bump bump
7 Dec 2012 — 9:38am
Generally...these are all quite nice--especially compared to most 'boutique' or 'small batch' brewery labels.
7 Dec 2012 — 11:51am
@ben_schuster: Is this personal, professional, or academic work?
8 Dec 2012 — 12:33am
@Chris - How would it affect the critique you were about to offer?
8 Dec 2012 — 9:16am
Thanks @aluminum! Appreciate it.
@Chris This would be a mix of personal and professional, I guess :) I'm starting a brewery with two friends, a brewer and a businessman - Sounds like the beginning of a bad joke, hehehe.
8 Dec 2012 — 6:09pm
I just like to have a sense of the nature of the work, who’s doing it &c.
9 Dec 2012 — 9:15am
Hard to evaluate a logo without knowing what qualities and feelings you're trying to communicate via the logo.
But in general I like them. I'd rotate Miraculum (which is my favorite) slightly so the verticals in the M are vertical, not leaning back. Villain I find a little hard to read.
11 Dec 2012 — 6:52am
Surely a taste of the product would help us to better judge the suitability of the logos! ;-)
11 Dec 2012 — 9:48am
Great idea! Lets have a big keg’er and design the isht out of this logo! WOOOO!
*crushes a beer can on his forehead*
11 Dec 2012 — 10:32am
VILLAIN looks like VILIAIN to me.
Would you want these to look like they all come from the same brewery? They certainly don't now.